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Hi
everyone!!!
In this
opportunity, I tell you about one of
the places (WE) that I love
so much.
A beautiful and mystical place called “Valle de la Luna”. It is located in the North of Chile, near of San Pedro de Atacama. Geographically, this place is located in the Cordillera de Domeyko. I went to this place in several times. Every time that I lived in Calama, I went to visit this place. Always I went with my parents and my sister, Valeska, and with others (WW)family members when they visited us. These years were the 2004, 2007, 2008, and 2010( )
Now, I tell you my “route” that I always do.
First, I went to see and photograph the site most popular(W.O) of the place, (P) called “Los Vigilantes” or “Las Tres Marias”, an interesting rock formation. Later, I went to the salt caves and the plains, it’s very beautiful! because,(P) it’s composed of quartz and, finally, I wait (T) for the nightfall, in this moment all the parts with quartz shine like the moon (the reason of the place’s name); everywhere shine a gleam colour silver ♥!!!. It’s fantastic, when the night come, I feel like a real astronaut xD. Is a magical experience.
It’s a beautiful place for relax and enjoy. I recommend you visit this place, if you have the opportunity of travel to one place, you won’t regret!.
A beautiful and mystical place called “Valle de la Luna”. It is located in the North of Chile, near of San Pedro de Atacama. Geographically, this place is located in the Cordillera de Domeyko. I went to this place in several times. Every time that I lived in Calama, I went to visit this place. Always I went with my parents and my sister, Valeska, and with others (WW)family members when they visited us. These years were the 2004, 2007, 2008, and 2010( )
Now, I tell you my “route” that I always do.
First, I went to see and photograph the site most popular(W.O) of the place, (P) called “Los Vigilantes” or “Las Tres Marias”, an interesting rock formation. Later, I went to the salt caves and the plains, it’s very beautiful! because,(P) it’s composed of quartz and, finally, I wait (T) for the nightfall, in this moment all the parts with quartz shine like the moon (the reason of the place’s name); everywhere shine a gleam colour silver ♥!!!. It’s fantastic, when the night come, I feel like a real astronaut xD. Is a magical experience.
It’s a beautiful place for relax and enjoy. I recommend you visit this place, if you have the opportunity of travel to one place, you won’t regret!.
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Hi
everyone!!!
In this opportunity, I tell you about of one place that I love so much.
A beautiful and mystical place called “Valle de la Luna”. It is located in the North of Chile, near of San Pedro de Atacama. Geographically, this place is located in the Cordillera de Domeyko. I went to this place in several times. Every time that I lived in Calama, I went to visit this place. Always I went with my parents and my sister, Valeska, and with other family members when they visited us.
In this opportunity, I tell you about of one place that I love so much.
A beautiful and mystical place called “Valle de la Luna”. It is located in the North of Chile, near of San Pedro de Atacama. Geographically, this place is located in the Cordillera de Domeyko. I went to this place in several times. Every time that I lived in Calama, I went to visit this place. Always I went with my parents and my sister, Valeska, and with other family members when they visited us.
Now, I tell
you my “route” that I always do.
First, I went to see and photograph the most popular site of the place called “Los Vigilantes” or “Las Tres Marias”, an interesting rock formation. Later, I went to the salt caves and the plains, it’s very beautiful! Because it’s composed of quartz and, finally, I waited for the nightfall, in this moment all the parts with quartz shine like the moon (the reason of the place’s name); everywhere shine a gleam colour silver ♥!!!. It’s fantastic, when the night come, I feel like a real astronaut xD. Is a magical experience.
It’s a beautiful place for relax and enjoy. I recommend you visit this place, if you have the opportunity of travel to one place, you won’t regret!.
First, I went to see and photograph the most popular site of the place called “Los Vigilantes” or “Las Tres Marias”, an interesting rock formation. Later, I went to the salt caves and the plains, it’s very beautiful! Because it’s composed of quartz and, finally, I waited for the nightfall, in this moment all the parts with quartz shine like the moon (the reason of the place’s name); everywhere shine a gleam colour silver ♥!!!. It’s fantastic, when the night come, I feel like a real astronaut xD. Is a magical experience.
It’s a beautiful place for relax and enjoy. I recommend you visit this place, if you have the opportunity of travel to one place, you won’t regret!.
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